the yellow kid

At a big yellow hospital there was a tiny person riding roller skates and on top of the hospital was a big blue pool. The person riding the roller skates went up to the pool and took his roller skates off and went for a swim. He swam sixteen laps of the pool in is yellow swimming costume, it was amazing he did this as he had only just come out of hospital after a skin problem turned him yellow and roller skates were stuck to his feet. In the future he will not swim in the pool with his roller skates again but he did.

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  1. Hello Harry,
    Your story made me smile. Not only did you use bold to easily show the prompt words, some more than once, you managed to do so in a funny story. I especially liked the ending “…bit he did”. It seems the tiny person didn’t learn a lesson.
    Very well done.
    Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

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